This is shaping up nicely. Just a few extra pointers beyond what I talked about in class:
- Zuleikha - in the section on Institution you need to talk a little about set-ups like Poison Pen Productions - small, independent production units that need to produce the goods on a budget - possibly refer to the timescales and budgets and how this relate to your project.
- Jess - Strawberry Swing video - you say it has no narrative - it does! I think you mean that it s story does not match the lyrics? Possibly worth clarifying?
- Jess - section on Indies - is there a little bit of a contradiction early on when you talk about the Indie being an individual and then talking about the indie stereotype? Again, I think I know what you mean but it may be worth clarifying this a bit more.
I hope by Thursday you have all your research finished and can start cracking on with the planning!
Mrs Doggart
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