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The research is beginning to take shape, so keep going, it's looking good!


Carla - have you taken your post on downloads etc off while you work on it or have I just missed it here?


Jess - I think you could analyse your two videos in a little more detail - how do they link to the lyrics? how do they sell the artist/ create voyeurism etc?


Matt - you still need somewhere to identify elements of the indie genre in terms of clothing and location codes and conventions?


There is a lot here but I think you still need a few more videos featured, identifying what you find interesting about them and what you can learn from them. Look over the gaps in your research, then I think you need a section at the end that focuses on "What have We Learnt And How Will We Use It?"


Mrs Doggart