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We really need that footage to come rolling in now! A lot of super research and planning, so we now need to make the product match!!

A few extra elements to work on:

• Zulaikha - section on 'The Importance of Music Videos' - may be worth outlining where you would release your video, given that you are featuring a new artists rather than a big name, and why you would sue this site/outlet... may like to link this to some of the web 2.0 ideas you looked at last year?
• Synopsis of treatment fro music video - why not add your aim here - to amplify the lyrics (and what this means) rather than telling a clear narrative with a full Todorov cycle?
• update entry - need to add more about what Matt did with the eye shot - what programmes/tools etc used and possibly a screen shot. it's impressive stuff and you need to record this to help you later on....
• cast list shots and comments on why you have selected the people - why they suit the roles....

Try and take some still shots of yourselves creating your product and add to your blog...

Mrs Doggart